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 In a world of endless blue,
-Of nothing but an ocean and the sky,
+Of nothing but ocean and the sky,
 A lone vessel ends its tune,
 Carrying a soul questioning 'why'.
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 Days became a haze,
 No more screaming,
-Mysterious ways,
+Water's mystery ways,
 No land in sight, just expanse,