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 A beautiful sight that reminds me of the one I love.
 The endless ocean, a canvas so wide,
-Our memories together come and go like the tide.
+Our time together comes and goes like the tide.
-Her warm laughter still echoes over the waves,
+Her warm laughter may echo over the waves,
-Still the water's cold, 'cause my heart it craves.
+But the water's cold, 'cause my heart it craves.
 An endless ocean, waves of blue,
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 To find the secrets that the waters keep.
 Is there a bottle? Silvery pieces of eight?
-No matter what, I'm with you, even if it makes me late
+You say if we find some treasure, oh, that'd be great
+(Oh but my treasure, I find, is you!)
 An endless ocean, waves of blue,